--- title: "Year 2 English: Editing and improving our work!" url: "https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/news/2022-04-28-year-2-english-editing-and-improving-our-work" school: "St Barnabas Primary School, A Church of England Academy" --- We are holding a number of open days for children due to start primary school in September 2027. Please see our admissions page for further details. Everyone welcome! # Year 2 English: Editing and improving our work! ![](https://files.schudio.com/st-barnabas-primary-school/images/news/english_edit_.JPG) 28 April 2022 Over the past few weeks, Year 2 have been busy writing their own diary entries, from the character 'Kevin's' perspective, in the story 'The Koala who Could'. We have been working on improving and editing our work in class. The children worked in pairs to roll the dice and select a particular diary entry feature to check. ![](https://st-barnabas-primary-school.schudio.com/images/news/english_edit_.JPG) [Year 2](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/news/tag/year-2) [English](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/news/tag/english) [![](https://files.schudio.com/st-barnabas-primary-school/imagecache/100x100c/news/pshe_teeth.JPG)](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/news/2022-04-28-year-2-pshe-dental-health) Previous ### [Year 2 PSHE: Dental Health](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/news/2022-04-28-year-2-pshe-dental-health) [![](https://files.schudio.com/st-barnabas-primary-school/imagecache/100x100c/news/1991BC24-F224-4ABF-B19C-E303B653351E.jpeg)](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/news/2022-04-29-friday-29th-april-celebration-worship) Next ### [Friday 29th April- Celebration Worship](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/news/2022-04-29-friday-29th-april-celebration-worship) ### Personal Development - [News](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/news) - [Events](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/events) - [Photo Gallery](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/photo-gallery-category/our-gallery) - [Calendar](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/calendar) - [School Council](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/academy-life/school-council) - [Attendance](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/academy-life/attendance) - [Fundraising](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/academy-life/fundraising) - [Extra Curricular Clubs](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/academy-life/clubs) - [Little Leaders](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/academy-life/little-leaders) - [Visits and Visitors](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/visits-and-visitors) - [British Values](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/british-values) - [Protected Characteristics](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/protected-characteristics) ##### Location Knowlesly Road Darwen Lancashire BB3 2JA ##### Contact Us 01254 702996 ##### Stay Connected - [Facebook](https://www.facebook.com/stbarnabasce/) - [X](https://twitter.com/stbarnabasce) © Copyright 2021–2026 St Barnabas Primary School, A Church of England Academy School & Trust Websites by [ ![Schudio logo](https://stbarnabasdarwen.co.uk/img/logo/light.png) ](https://www.schudio.com/)